Betsy, Lila, Aria and I have been working on our Green Gold slides. We are doing a soccer tournament to fundraise for Starship (A hospital). Our group is called CLAB. I hope you enjoy my slides and can understand them.
Hi Charlotte, I thought your blog was incredible. It Reminds me of when I played soccer every Saturday. You had so many ideas and a lot of writing, but you did have some spelling mistakes on slide 4 like wissels is whistles and pomishion is permission, did you reread it?
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Hi Charlotte, I like how you added our slides and said what we were doing.Maybe next time say what the starship hospital is. Aria
ReplyDeleteHi Charlotte, I thought your blog was incredible. It Reminds me of when I played soccer every Saturday. You had so many ideas and a lot of writing, but you did have some spelling mistakes on slide 4 like wissels is whistles and pomishion is permission, did you reread it?
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